好文: gender什么意思

爱吃辣的加拿大大叔 雅思托福10多年一线教学 中文说得还不错，头像是他家猫 在这里分享他原创的雅思写作干货 每篇范文都有配音，在同名公众号英语考试Cat

你好呀，我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。雅思作文的introduction应包含三个要素：

告知读者文章的scope，你可以通过paraphase（改述）作文题目来实现。确定论点。这个点可以融进告知读者文章的scope部分。意图或观点（或两者兼有）句，这句话通常也叫论题陈述句。

今天我们通过几个案列来看看怎么改述雅思大作文的题目。

我推荐以下3种方法：

改词性。你想要改述的词有名词/形容词/动词词性吗？如果你找不到这个词的近义词，那就试试这个词的其它词性。举个案列：creative可以改成creativity；imagination可以改成imaginative。找近义词。改写的常见方法是用同义词替代。在备考的时候，准备一些高频词汇的近义词并牢记。比如，should的同义词ought to，children的同义词youngsters。需要注意的是，有的词很难找到同义词，比如artist，再比如competitive。在实在找不到同义词的情况下，可以不用改写这个词。改句子结构。比如把主动式改成被动式，反之亦然；或者改句子里的从句结构。简单句，复杂句，和复合句相结合，句子类型和句子长度要灵活多变，这样你的文章也会比较自然。

以下举几个雅思大作文题目的改述案列（特别注意加粗部分）：

话题： Urbanization

题目：Many small town center shops arerunning out of businessbecause ruralresidents tend to go shoppinginbig city stores. To what extent do the disadvantages of this development outweigh the advantages?

改述：The trend ofurbanizationis causing many rural town businesses to gobankrupt or lose business, asshoppers prefer to buy their productsinlarge department stores and shopping malls.

题目：In many countries,more moneyis being spenton transport systems in the cities. In contrast,very littleis spent inruralareas. What are the effects of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

改述：There seems to be ageneral trendthese days for governmentsto investheavily in urban public transport,whileinvestment innon-urbancommunity transport islacking.

话题：Environment

题目：Scientistshave beenwarning for many yearsabout environmental protectionand that weshould limitthe use of energyin our daily lives. What are the reasons for this? How to encourage people to take an interest towards environment protection?

改述：The last few decades have seena prolific increase inscientific literatureabout thedangers of environmental degradationand so encourage peopleto reducetheirenergy use.

话题：Gender issues

题目：Some peoplethink thatmenarenaturallymore competitive thanwomen. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

改述：It has been commonly assumedby manythatmalesareinstinctivelymore competitive thanfemales.

话题：Work

题目：The world of workis changing rapidly.Working conditionstoday are not the same as before and people no longer rely on takingonejob for life. Describe the possible causes and give suggestions on how people should prepare for work in the future.

改述：Over the last few decades, thework environment has been radically changingand as such, so has the concept of having justa singlecareer orline of work in ones life.

写作备考不要懒，要真的去写，去表达自己的观点、想法，哪怕没有那么华丽的辞藻。写完之后要仔细分析、认真总结。

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祝各位早日和雅思分手，加油！